Suggestions for changing paragraphs
Oh my Fuckin
Do you realize how annoying it is when you don’t switch paragraphs when a new character is speaking
Do you realize how confusing it is
I don’t care if they’re using one-word responses at each other, start a new damn paragraph.
ESPECIALLY IF YOU HAVE MORE THAN ONE CHARACTER.
Wait, wasn’t that obvious?
ok but also
you do not always have to do this. its not set in stone.
say theres a long comment that one character is making.
"I just don’t think you should go to that party," said Jane, reaching out to pat her friend reassuringly on the shoulder. "I don’t trust those dudes, especially not that Joe guy." Beside them, Joe let out a half-hearted, "Hey!" of protest, but Jane ignored him. "The point is," she continued, "our party’s gonna be hot as fuck anyway, we dont need those losers."
the above is perfectly acceptable. and in fact, to have broken up Jane’s comment with a very short word from Joe would’ve disrupted the flow of Jane’s words, which is v important!!!!!! that was a very simplistic example, but yeah it’s perrrrfectly fine to have exceptions to these rules.